Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays,

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has become

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of the most crucial parts of every business across the world. Despite the fact that it is an industry which is second to none in terms of importance to every society, people take some different opinions on

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issue. Some of them accept it as a great factor in purchasing but others do not have enough attention to it

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I profoundly agree with the first group.

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and negative effects of

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object. On the

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hand, advertising

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up opportunities for business development in every community.

It is clear that

, in the first step of beginning a trade, advertising plays a crucial role.

Also

, it is important to make our vocation public.

As a result

, to have a successful career, a wide range of

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would be indispensable. As an example, when someone is going to grow his/ her work, it is better to make it public by some real

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on billboards in the city or on the television.

Furthermore

, publications can be extremely profitable for

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people to have a reasonable choice. A case in point is, if

one

can see plenty of

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for different products, he/ she will

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to compare different prices, models, and brands. For these reasons, advertising is a significant factor

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marketing. On the other, the drawback of advertising can always far outweigh the advantages. It is common to spend a lot of

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and money on that which usually are not real. A good example here is, at present time there are some institutes for learning a new language without enough knowledge of that, which make public their work just to absorb the students. Overtly, the length of publications would make them repetitive. So, they would not be captivating to the

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. From what has been discussed above

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can conclude, advertisement has both advantages and disadvantages which are common in every trade.

However

, by having a powerful management, not only can it be reasonable and attractive for

buyer

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buyers

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but

also

the merchants can profit by.