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In many countries, plastic containers have become more common than ever and are used by many food and drink companies. Do you think the advantages outweighs the disadvantages.

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One of the most conspicuous trends of today's contemporary world is the colossal upsurge in the usage of
plastic
 containers .Food and drink companies have drastically increased the usage of
plastic
 as it is very economical. I vehemently agree that the consumption of
plastic
 has far more benefits than demerits and will elucidate these merits in forthcoming paragraphs. To commence with, the predominant reason why folks are against the use of
plastic
 is environmental pollution .
Plastic
 takes a long time to convert into complete scrap .many people throw
plastic
 bottles around the sea views which results in swallowing
plastic
 by sea creatures. But these are the consequences of people's negligence .
Instead
 of throwing them, they should be properly disposed of.There are many awareness campaigns on television and radio regarding the topic of recycling and disposal.
for instance
, Coca-cola is offering rewards upon the return of its bottles that will assist them to scrap them properly.
On the other hand
 usage of
plastic
 bottles is very economical .it reduces the production cost drastically .
additionally
,
plastic
 is handy to mould into any shape.
Furthermore
, It requires less space and a few carriages to transport them over long distances. As it diminishes the production cost awfully it becomes very cheap for end-user as well . To recapitulate , it can be reiterated that
plastic
 consumption has more advantages than drawbacks . It is everyone's responsibility to keep the environment clean .More awareness campaigns can educate people to dispose of
plastic
 with care.
Moreover
, the government should take stringent actions against those who are not adopting recycling techniques for disposal .
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