The map below shows two potential locations for a shopping mall in the city of Brandfield. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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figure depicts the shopping in the city of Brandfield in

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potential locations. It is clear from the map

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that

the

river

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from the north to the west of the mall.

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what is

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shown

we can notice that the golf course and the park

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the west side of the mall and

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completely

to the south

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the

river

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connected

to the road from the east side.The road from the east side

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to cut the

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House

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, the railway

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the city

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and the Industrial estate

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directly

from the north to the east. We can notice the

river

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from the north to the west

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surrounded

by the all places and cut the City

center

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from the middle.

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, we could say that the railway

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connected

with all erya and started from S1 point to S2 in the south.

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