Students perform better in school when they are rewarded than punished. to what extend do you agree or disagree ?

It is irrefutable that, schooling plays a pertinent role in the

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because it teaches necessary skills of

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life. though it is argued, learners perform

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will be discussing my opinion in the looming paragraphs.

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saying, why rewarding a student is

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rather than punishing? Every human on the earth does work and

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their dire responsibilities in order to

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receive

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importance and respect from other individuals. Certainly, importance is

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fuel to the human mind. To be more specific, when a student is rewarded in front of his whole class, he

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respected and a unique experience,

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his brain chase for the same situation again.

In contrast

, every learner is not good in its academics,

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them will not

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them to be a topper

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the class.

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the learners who perform not well, because rewarding

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performance will

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them to gain

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results again. In order to deviate

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for better performance, evidently they need to be punished for their better cause. In a nutshell, students are like

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, they will take a shape

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the exposure from the system.

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opine appreciating

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best performance should not be ignored

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average learners.