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Students perform better in school when they are rewarded than punished. to what extend do you agree or disagree ?

#students #school
It is irrefutable that, schooling plays a pertinent role in the
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 life
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 because it teaches necessary skills of
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life. though it is argued, learners perform
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while
 schooling, if they are rewarded
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. I strongly advocate
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the former statement and
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 will be discussing my opinion in the looming paragraphs.
To begin
, it is potent to understand the basic concept behind
this
 saying, why rewarding a student is
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fruitful
 rather than punishing? Every human on the earth does work and
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 their dire responsibilities in order to
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receive
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importance and respect from other individuals. Certainly, importance is
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equal
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 to getting an
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appreciation
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fuel to the human mind. To be more specific, when a student is rewarded in front of his whole class, he
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 respected and a unique experience,
as a result
 his brain chase for the same situation again.
In contrast
, every learner is not good in its academics,
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 them will not
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 them to be a topper
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 the class.
Furthermore
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 the learners who perform not well, because rewarding
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worst
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 performance will
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 them to gain
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 results again. In order to deviate
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 for better performance, evidently they need to be punished for their better cause. In a nutshell, students are like
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, they will take a shape
according to
 the exposure from the system.
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Nevertheless
,
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 opine appreciating
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best performance should not be ignored
as well as
 prohibiting the punishment
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 average learners.
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