Some people think the government should pay for health care and education, but others believe it is not the government's responsibility. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, With the development of society, people’s life pressure is increasing. So, government whether it needs

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for

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medical treatment and education is a controversial issue. In my opinion, I think the government should provide some welfare and help to everyone, but at the same time, there will

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be some troubles after doing.

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it is obvious that

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the

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of the population growth rate and the job chance

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decreasing, people’s economic pressure is rising.

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means that many unemployed people can’t get a good education with their children. they can’t afford school pees, and they even can not pay for transportation costs of

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to school. Sometimes, when they are sick, they are unwilling

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to the hospital because

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they cannot pay medical bills.

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, I think

government

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the government

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should provide these two basic benefits for everybody. Because can not only improve human cultural level but

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strengthen their physical quality.

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on the other hand

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, if

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the state

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brings some

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, it will

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be accompanied by some problems.

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everyone’s needs extent are different, maybe they need support on

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.

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, many students want to study abroad and if

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pays the full tuition fee, it will be a large sum of money. The administration is impossible

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of

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each

person

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wants. In the end, I think if the state wants to bring

advantage

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to everybody, it must consider their needs. There is no ‘one size fits all’ prescription. Personally, the administration has

responsibility

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the responsibility

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to pay for fitness care and

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education

edcation

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education

of adults and children, To summarize, we must be careful not to make

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into a

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question.