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Some educationalists say that every child should be taught how to play a musical instrument. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some educationalists say that every child should be taught how to play a musical instrument. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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It is widely believed that
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 should learn how to play a musical instrument. Personally, I completely agree with
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 idea for a variety of reasons. First of all,
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child
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the child
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 can create their own personality.
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 is because music can stimulate their imagination and if they learn how to play a musical instrument, the stimulation is more effective and from there, they can build and develop their own world and
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 their personalities. In fact, people always feel
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 to someone
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 has
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 and artistic
personalities
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According to
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 IMC (International Music Council) experiment, there are 67%
people
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 around the world feel attracted when they talk with people
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 can play musical instruments.
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, a
child
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 can improve their ability to absorb, think,… through
learn
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 about music.
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 means that when
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 learn and feel notes and melody, their brains will
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be more
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 active and improve their ability. In fact,
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 has learned and played musical instruments often think and solve the problem skillfully and effectively more than a normal
child
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According to
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 the report of Havard University, the ability
of thinking
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 in children
can
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 play instrumental is more sensitive and adaptive quickly than in normal
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 13%. In conclusion, there
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 opinions about the question”
should
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 we let our children learn musical instruments?”. Personally, I think we should let them learn and play it because there are lots of great benefits.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

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  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
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  • even though
  • despite

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