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all over the world

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is lack of earnings. Based on the record most of the time as the volatile of the living coast, the number of thieves is rising.

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the income per capita will

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the rate of

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vocational training is a sensible measurement towards preventing criminal cases. Another step to cut down

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and facilities. If the jail

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in the real world by skill class, religion and

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will be decreased. In conclusion,

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for the large society and perpetrator. The government should step a practical approach to prevent it.