The graphs below compare the number of cosmetic procedures performed on males and females in Korea in 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
First of all, the bar charts illustrate the cosmetic methods performed on Korean
men
and women
in 2004. Eyelid surgery was the most popular process among women
while
most men
preferred hair transplantation.
Overall
, cosmetic operations were more popular among women
in Korea than men
in 2004.
Secondly
, the least famous surgeries were liposuction and facelift among females and males respectively. Rhinoplasty and laser skin resurfacing were performed on both genders. Moreover
, the number of rhinoplasty surgeries performed on women
was about five times higher than that of men
whereas
, the number of laser skin surfing processes conducted on men
was about four times lesser than that of women
.
Furthermore
, breast enlargement was the second least famous surgery among women
in 2004 which was around 150.
All things considered, facelift and abdominoplasty methods were the lowest-performed operations in men
where both showed values lower than 20. The count of eyelid surgeries received by women
in 2004 was more than five times greater than that of the hair transplantation procedures tested on men
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