The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.
The given line chart demonstrates the percentages of the
population
who were or
older than 65 years old in three different countries, and their estimated proportion in the future from 1940 to 2040. Correct word choice
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Overall
, Sweden has the most significant proportion of elderly
, but, Japan's elder Correct article usage
the elderly
population
will take over the leading status in 2030.
Both the USA and Sweden followed similar
upward trend from 1940 to the present. The ratio of the elder Correct article usage
a similar
population
in the USA is around 15 per cent which is 3% less than their Sweden counterpart. Both of the countries will increase moderately to over 20% from now to 2040. Moreover
, between 1990 to 2015, the elder population
of the USA constant
at 14% which was remarkable.
Before 2010, the proportion of the community who were aged 65 and higher was around 4-5 per cent per year. Add a missing verb
was constant
Then
, this
increased moderately from 2010 to the present,
and will increase Remove the comma
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expontentialy
to 25% in the middle of 2030s.Correct your spelling
exponentially
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