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The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.

The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.
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The given line chart demonstrates the percentages of the
population
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 who were
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older than 65 years old in three different countries, and their estimated proportion in the future from 1940 to 2040.
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, Sweden has the most significant proportion of
elderly
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the elderly
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, but, Japan's elder
population
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 will take over the leading status in 2030. Both the USA and Sweden followed
similar
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 upward trend from 1940 to the present. The ratio of the elder
population
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 in the USA is around 15 per cent which is 3% less than their Sweden counterpart. Both of the countries will increase moderately to over 20% from now to 2040.
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, between 1990 to 2015, the elder
population
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 of the USA
constant
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 at 14% which was remarkable. Before 2010, the proportion of the community who were aged 65 and higher was around 4-5 per cent per year.
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,
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 increased moderately from 2010 to the present
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and will increase
expontentialy
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exponentially
 to 25% in the middle of 2030s.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words population with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "moderately" was used 2 times.
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