The charts below show US spending patterns between 1966 and 1996

The charts below show US spending patterns between 1966 and 1996
The given pie charts represent the
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citizens spending habits
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seven different categories from 1966 to 1966.
Overall
, the most significant expenditure of the USA population was food and cars in 1966 and 1996 respectively. In 1966, the leading sector was food which decreased by 30% in 1996.
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, many sectors followed a similar downward trend
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as petrol (%9), books(%6) and furniture (%10). These industries declined
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slightly
over 30 years. The US car expenses
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roughly doubled after 30 years and reached 45%, which was the highest
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the country.
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of restaurants
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its proportion to 14%. The value of computer expenses ten times rose compared to 1966, and become 10 per cent.
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