You are visiting another town next month for a short break. Write a letter to the tourist information center. In your letter •Tell them how long you are staying •Ask for some suggestions for what to do • Find out if any local events happening at that time

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Dear Sir or Madam, I’m trying to get some advice about getting the best out of visiting Shiraz, as I’m planning on visiting your area in July for 3 days, from the 10th to the 13th. First of all, what nature place can you recommend for camping?

Although

I’m travelling alone, I have a suitable tent and other camping equipment that probably I will need.

Also

, are there any special events during the time that I will be there? I have heard that there was a traditional annual ceremony on the 12th of July on Takhte-Jamshid. But it seems that it hasn’t been held in the previous two years because of Covid-19. So, I was wondering if the ceremony will be held. Thanks for your time Yours sincerely, Manijeh Roostaei

Submitted by manijehroostaei on Thu Jun 01 2023

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

130 words

8.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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You are visiting another town next month for a short break. Write a letter to the tourist information center. In your letter •Tell them how long you are staying •Ask for some suggestions for what to do • Find out if any local events happening at that time

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In some countries, university education is free for every citizen. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

Discuss the benefits that Artificial Intelligence brings to society and the potential positive impacts on daily life.

It is not necessary for people to travel to other places to learn about the culture. We can learn as much as from books, films and the Internet. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe using modern technology (digital photographs, blogs) is the best way to record and remember important personal events. Others think the traditional method (making photo albums, writing diaries) is better. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people believe that children should spend all of their free time with their families. Others believe that this is unnecessary or even negative. Discuss the possible arguments on both sides, and say which side you personally support.