You are visiting another town next month for a short break. Write a letter to the tourist information center. In your letter •Tell them how long you are staying •Ask for some suggestions for what to do • Find out if any local events happening at that time

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Dear Sir or Madam, I’m trying to get some advice about getting the best out of visiting Shiraz, as I’m planning on visiting your area in July for 3 days, from the 10th to the 13th. First of all, what nature place can you recommend for camping?

Although

I’m travelling alone, I have a suitable tent and other camping equipment that probably I will need.

Also

, are there any special events during the time that I will be there? I have heard that there was a traditional annual ceremony on the 12th of July on Takhte-Jamshid. But it seems that it hasn’t been held in the previous two years because of Covid-19. So, I was wondering if the ceremony will be held. Thanks for your time Yours sincerely, Manijeh Roostaei

Submitted by manijehroostaei on Thu Jun 01 2023

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2Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

130 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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You are visiting another town next month for a short break. Write a letter to the tourist information center. In your letter •Tell them how long you are staying •Ask for some suggestions for what to do • Find out if any local events happening at that time

Word Count

A lot of money is spent on repairing old building. Instead of repairing old building that money should be spent on knocking down old building and building new ones. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

You need a website for your business, and you would like to ask your friend to build it. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter Include a brief description of your business Explain what you would like to have on the website Provide some ideas on the use of images on the website.

Playing computer games only has negative effects on children. To what extent do you agree or disagree

It is observed that, currently more and more people are working longer hours. What are the causes of this phenomenon? What effects does this have on the society?.

Some species of animals are almost extinct; and many others seem to be fast approaching a similar risk. What are the reasons for this? What should be done to solve this problem?