You are visiting another town next month for a short break. Write a letter to the tourist information center. In your letter •Tell them how long you are staying •Ask for some suggestions for what to do • Find out if any local events happening at that time

#town #month #tourist #information #center #•tell #•ask #suggestions #events #time

Dear Sir or Madam, I’m trying to get some advice about getting the best out of visiting Shiraz, as I’m planning on visiting your area in July for 3 days, from the 10th to the 13th. First of all, what nature place can you recommend for camping?

Although

I’m travelling alone, I have a suitable tent and other camping equipment that probably I will need.

Also

, are there any special events during the time that I will be there? I have heard that there was a traditional annual ceremony on the 12th of July on Takhte-Jamshid. But it seems that it hasn’t been held in the previous two years because of Covid-19. So, I was wondering if the ceremony will be held. Thanks for your time Yours sincerely, Manijeh Roostaei

Submitted by manijehroostaei on Thu Jun 01 2023

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2Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

130 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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You are visiting another town next month for a short break. Write a letter to the tourist information center. In your letter •Tell them how long you are staying •Ask for some suggestions for what to do • Find out if any local events happening at that time

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