The charts below show the favourite takeaways of people in Canada and the number of Indian restaurants in Canada between 1960 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, adn make comparisons where relevant.

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The diagrams illustrate

Canadians

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' favourite takeaways and the amount of

Indian

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Restaurants in

Canada

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between 1960 and 2015. The measurement is given by percentage for the

favorite

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favourite

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takeaways and the number from 0-10000 for

Indian

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food stores.

Overall

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, the most liked cuisines in

Canada

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are

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from Thailand.

While

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, the least cuisines liked are from Japan, Mexico, and Greece.

Moreover

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Indian

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India

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became Canadian's favourite

meals

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meal

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after Thai and

the

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apply

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Indian

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restaurants were expanding largely from 1960 to 2015. To start with,

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Canadians

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Canadians'

Canadian's

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least favourite meals are Japanese, Mexican and Greece which have similar

percentage

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percentages

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which

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apply

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just 1%. Chinese and the other menu

also

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did not popular in

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, they only consumed it by 3% and 4%, respectively.

The

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On the

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other side, there are a lot of

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consumed

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who consumed

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Italian and Persian foods (10% and 9%, respectively).

Lastly

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, the most ordered

takeways

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takeaways

takeaway

were from Thai (34%) and

Indian

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(26%).

However

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, there are 11%

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Canadians

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of Canadians

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who

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apply

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did not like to order anything. Because

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apply

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the

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apply

show examples

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Indian's

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Indian

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food popularity

spreaded

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spread

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Canada

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, the number of

Indian

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restaurants

were

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was

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also

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increasing

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over

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the

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apply

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time. In 1960, there were only less than 2000

Indian

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food stores. But, in 2015 the stores became wider and hit

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apply

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almost 10000

takeaways

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takeaway

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places.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words canadians, indian, canada with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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6
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
3
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
22
Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

203 words

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