The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed.
The table and charts are informed us where the police funds are coming from and where they are handed out in 2017,2018.
Overall
, the amount of money has been increasing in 2018 from two sources government and taxes, while
the other sources stayed the same. On the other hand
, the expenses in technology were becoming bigger and it stayed stable in constructing and transferring. Obviously, the wages expenses shirked between two years.
Firstly
, the budget in 2017 had been collected from governmental origin was 175.5 which increased to 177.8 million in 2018. Local taxes also
raised about ten from 91.2 to 102.3 million. Whilst the other origins boosted a bit around half m.
Secondly
, the expenditures which are reflected in governmental officers and staff salaries dropped from 75% to 69%. While
technological expenditures approximately doubled. Finally
, the money that is
specified for the construction and transport field has no changes.Submitted by alasfar.maram on
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