In the past, most people used to travel to their place of work. With increased use of computers, the internet and smart phone, more and more people are starting to work from home. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development? You should use your own ideas knowledge and experience, and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence. Write at least 250 words.

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at
home
become
more
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and more popular way for
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the worker
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worker
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. It is a strongly argued topic that many
people
have their own opinion
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this
actuality. In
this
essay, I will discuss both the positive and negative aspects of
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work
way.
To begin
with, for some
people
that need to drive, they can save some money
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petrol, if they
work
at
home
.
Furthermore
, for others,
people
work
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at
home
can decrease cost on
road
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the road
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.
For
example
, lots of
people
always go to
workplace
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the workplace
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by train or bus,
however
, these transports are not free.
Consequently
, the biggest advantage of
work
stay at
home
would be more economical than
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to
workplace
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the workplace
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.
Other significant benefit
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of
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from
home
can reduce accidents.
Therefore
,
workers
are able
to begin
working on time.
For everyone
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,
in
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outside, have many potential dangers.
People
sometimes have different accidents.
For
example
, drivers have terrible car accidents.
In addition
,
workers
will
late
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if they meet heavy congestion. For some
people
that need to by bus or train, bus or train
dately
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lately
arrive station
lead
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to late for
work
. What’s more,
work
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working
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from
home
can efficiently decline exhaust pollution,
the
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number of carbon dioxide is decreased. Air quality has really made an improvement in urban. Whilst,
people
work
at
home
also
have disadvantages. The biggest
drawbacks
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drawback
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of
this
is that
people
lack
face to
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face
communication.
People
always through
internet
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the internet
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have
discussion
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a discussion
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in
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home
.
For
example
,
workers
usually have online meetings. But
people
always won’t have a
clearly
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understanding
to
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these topics
in
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work
.
In contrast
,
face to
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face-to-face
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face
communication is the better way.
Furthermore
, for some
workers
, they won’t concentrate on
jobs
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their jobs
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. There are too many distractions
in
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at
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home
.
For
example
, some
workers
still sleep or play games in
time
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the time
a time
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of
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off
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work
.
Consequently
, some
people
work
from
home
due to
low
efficient
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efficiency
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. In conclusion, as can be seen from the points made in
this
essay,
work
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working
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from
home
have aspects of positive and negative. In my opinion,
workers
can find
balance
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the balance
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of
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between
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work
at
home
and
office
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the office
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. Take advantage
in
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time.
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