The graph below shows the average number of UK commuters travelling each day by car, bus or rain between 1970 and 2030. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The provided chart gives information about the average
number
of commuters
who use three particular types of transportation namely car, bus
, and train
on a daily basis.
It can be clearly seen that the most preferable means of transportation is private cars
. Meanwhile
the Add a comma
,Meanwhile
number
of people
who choose the bus
is decreasing gradually.
Starting at more than 5 million
daily travellers in 1970, private cars
became the most common option for people
. The second most popular choice was by bus
, which began with about 4 million
commuters
. Whereas
, travelling by train
was the least preferable option, the figure for this
choice started at nearly 2.1 million
. The number
of people
who used private cars
was increasing gradually to about 7.5 million
in 2020. Whereas
, bus
commuters
decreased slightly to nearly 3 million
in the same year. There was a slight rise in the number
of train
travellers to about 3.3 million
.
From 2020 to 2030, the number
of people
who choose cars
is predicted to increase dramatically to 9 million
in 2030. Furthermore
, the number
of train
commuters
is projected to share the same pattern with car commuters
, it will be increased to nearly 5 million
in 2030. Finally
, buses will experience a downward trend, the figure will decrease gradually to under 3 million
in 2030.Submitted by minhnx2 on
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