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Nowadays more and more people change jobs in their working lives.Is this a positive or negative development.

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In
this
 burgeoning time,more and more
people
 are willing to take up
an
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 better occupation.It is universally acknowledged that staffs frequently replace their
works
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 in their careers.I reckon that it is beneficial for individuals
although
 there are some
shortcomes
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shortcomings
. It is no doubt that staves have no rich energy to promote their relationship
between
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 their
collegues
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colleagues
.Beginners have less time than senior
employee
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employees
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 to communicate with others. To be specific,individuals who
initially
 embark on the career have to spend plenty of time grasping their own assignments and rules on responsibilities.
Therefore
 they are too busy
to
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 small talk which is
a
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 efficient way to boost
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bond
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 with your
collegues
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colleagues
.
On the other hand
,
job
 changes can promote themselves.First of all,
people
 who
changes
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job
 can gain a variety of experiences and skills.
For instance
,
people
 are likely to learn methods of statistics and
anlysis
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analysis
 embarking on the big basics industry.
Additionally
,workers can learn the skills of
communications
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 when they are working in the
reprenstation
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representation
reforestation
 industry. In case changing
job
 has more opportunities improve themselves.
Furthermore
,
people
 can get more financial
supports
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support
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 from
the a
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 well-paid
job
.It is claimed that
people
 are willing to change
job
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jobs
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due to
 higher salaries.In
this
 case,workers can reduce financial
burdern
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burdens
 from life
such
 as electric fees and expenses of transportation.
To conclude
,
although
people
 who change
job
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jobs
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 fail to keep
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the relationship
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relationship
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relationships
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between
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with
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 their former
colleague
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colleagues
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,they can improve themselves and gain
experiences
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experience
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 and reduce financial issues.
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