You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows the amount of money spent on books in Germany, France, Italy and Austria between 1995 and 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The figure depicts a line graph illustrating the
amount
of money spent on books over the span of a decade, in four countries: Germany, France
, Italy and Austria
.
Germany clearly spent the most on books over the course of the decade, spending at least $15million
more than Correct your spelling
15 million
France
at any given point. The most they spent was in 2005, spending approximately $95million. From 1995 to 2005, there was a general increase
in expenditure, despite a drop in 2003.
France
followed Germany, being the country to spend the second highest amount
. There was a steady increase
in the total spent, from 1995 to 2005. In 1997, France
and Italy spent almost the same amount
, however
Add a comma
,however
France
maintained it's
second Correct your spelling
its
postion
.
Italy and Correct your spelling
position
Austria
spent the least amount
of money on books. Before 2003, Italy had spent more than Austria
, however
after 2003, Austria
had overtaken Italy in book expense. The sharp increase
between 2001 and 2003 for Austria
caused the change in sequence, pushing Italy to final
position. Add an article
the final
a final
Austria
showed a general increase
in expense
, Fix the agreement mistake
expenses
whereas
Italy's line graph had a dip in 1999.Submitted by patelmeera on
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