The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The two maps here are to compare the shapes and functions of an

island

before and after some

renovational

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renovation

renovations

changes. Adding tourist amenities has totally filled the area with recreational and residential facilities. By and large, the planners have not reduced the green features of the land, the trees here. The shape of the

island

is more like a long triangle with its longer side on the East. After the

renovatioin

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renovation

, the southern coast includes a piler on which boat sailers could mount, and

then

head for the reception. A large restaurant has

also

been made on top of the reception

center

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centre

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. Those two

buildinngs

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buildings

are surrounded now on

left

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the left

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and right by some huts, having been designed for the tourists to reside in. Footpaths have been installed between all huts to link them in two oval patterns: the larger on the east and the smaller on the west side of the

island

Central

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The central

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territory is paved with vehicle tracks which makes it easy for tourists to go from South to North by car. The western part of the

island

which used to be a vacant beach, now, features a swimming area, without any added construction to damage the geographical shape of that side.

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