In many countries, very few young people read newspapers or follow the news on TV. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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In more and more modern society these days. The total youngster is decreasing
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reading
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or watching
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news
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lots of reasons.
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issue. On the one hand, today the internet is developing.
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most
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so they would like to find
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online lieu of reading
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or
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not have free
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the
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or reading on magazines, they are very busy, they are
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spending
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studying or the deadline
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working.
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but they do not like
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news
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programs, they just want
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music or famous
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programs, some
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want
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times
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finding money or some
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children
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online so they never care about what is the new? From some causes above, I have some solutions to support
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phenomenon. All parents should
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them
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children about reading
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newspaper
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or
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the
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very important to the
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developments
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. The youngster really
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need
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understand
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that if they get more
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any way they can have lots of benefits,
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, they know learning
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because
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if they can speak
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.....
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,
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people
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should give information public about important
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news
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young
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, they will
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up with the society is developing and all knowledge from
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news
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is very important In conclusion,
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my part I have some reasons and solutions
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novels
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but I hope
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can
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in the future. the government should have
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solutions for
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