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you need to arganize an affice event in a community center to celebrate the 100th anniversary of the company. write a letter to your owner about 1- request the budget of the cermony 2- explain the importance of event 3- ask hi using the conference room on that date.

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Dear owner I hope that you are very well on summer vacation. I am writing
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 letter to request you about 15000$ money for the 100th-anniversary ceremony. you can see all of the details of the cost
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 as food, orchestra, temporary employee, decorating, etc. in the pdf. file that I attach to
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 email. I personally believe that one of the important reasons for the growth and increase in customers and profit of the company in the
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 10 years, introduce ourselves to the international community by participating in exhibitions and performing many events like these. Based on the result obtained after each event, profit of company have had a huge jump.
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, I want to get permission to use a big conference room for the celebration. Already I know you are very sensitive about it. Fortunately, decorating company has given us reassurance to protect all of the things in
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 room. I hope that you allow us to use the conference hall. I look forward to hearing from you as soon as possible. Faithfully Mary Van Houser
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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