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The pie charts show the destination of export goods in three countries in 2010.

The pie charts show the destination of export goods in three countries in 2010.
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The given pie chart illustrates the percentage of the areas of merchandise that was shipped from 3 different countries in 2010. In brief, the highest proportion of the
Mexico
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 chart was occupied by the US,
whereas
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 other Latin America accounted for the largest section of the graphs of Argentina and Chile. Moving to the details,
Mexico
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 exported 62% of their goods to the US, and the rest categories were the same percentage which is 6%. USA was more than 3 times the sum of the EU, other Latin America and the others.
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, the pie chart of Argentina and
Mexico
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 showed a similar trend, within both graphs other Latin America was in the highest position at 38% and 31 per cent respectively.
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, Europe took up 2 highest percentage of both chats at just more than a quarter and less than a third. The
last
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 position was the US at 16% in Argentina and 18% in
Mexico
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Vocabulary: Replace the words mexico with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "graphs" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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