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In some countries owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might be this the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation? Write atleast 250 words

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House is one of the essential parts
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 our lives. In
current
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 situation with the youth generation, there are debates on whether one should own a home or
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just
renting
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 one. The following essay will state my thoughts regarding
this
 issue. Admittedly, the cost of owning a property nowadays is extremely expensive. The price is rising year by year.
Therefore
, I could say that
this
 is a negative situation for someone to buy a dwelling, especially if they are being forced to. Renting a house is not a fault as long as they have
roof
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 above their head. My thoughts on why
this
 is a negative notion is because
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this
 era,
youngster
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youngsters
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 tend to spend their money on leisure activities and to follow the current trend they find on social media rather than to save their income.
For instance
, they prefer to grab a coffee after office
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 or to
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 with their friends at a coffee shop,
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 to
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concert, hiking, and
relaxing
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 on the beach. With
this
 kind of behaviour, young people will find it hard to buy a home for themselves. Originally, the vast majority of
developer
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 will offer an instalment to ease the payment burden,
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 it will still be a challenging situation if
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most
of
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the
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people keep wasting their money on something
that is
 unnecessary. In conclusion, owning a house is definitely a great idea for us to be
secured
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 to have a place until we get older.
However
,
this
 notion might not
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in
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this
 generation because the necessity of today’s generation is changed.
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