The charts below compare the age structure of the populations of France and India in 1984.

The charts below compare the age structure of the populations of France and India in

1984.
The charts illustrate the populations in
France
and
India
in 1984
according to
age and gender.
Overall
, it is obvious that the population in
India
is pyramidal in terms of age, whilst the percentage of inhabitance in
France
fluctuates.
In addition
, the scale of the young is wider in
India
.
However
, the people in
France
live longer. First and foremost, the base scale in
India
is the younger one which is 7% for those whose ages are under 5.
Then
, the percentage decreased as the age is becoming bigger. The summit of the chart is belonging to the oldest people who are still under seventy years.
Furthermore
, there are no big differences between slices under forty in
France
where everyone represents about four per cent. The percentage increased generally except for two segments, 40-45 and 65 – 70. The top of the chart shows that people who live longer are women. Those who live more than eighty-five.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • charts
  • age structure
  • populations
  • France
  • India
  • 1984
  • overall
  • different
  • evenly distributed
  • proportion
  • young people
  • elderly individuals
  • largest age group
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