An increasing number of people are choosing to have cosmetic surgery in order to improve their appearance. Why are more people choosing to have operation to change the way they look? Do you think this a positive or negative development?
Cosmetic surgery is an effective way to change the
appearance
of a person. The prevalence of individuals changing the way they look is increasing. I think people
do it because they are not satisfied in
their Change preposition
with
appearance
and the cost of cosmetic surgeries
is decreasing which I believe, are negative developments.
The reason why people
are not satisfied with their looks and still under goes
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undergoes
surgeries
despite the high price and negative effects is due to
the appearance
of celebrities and influencers, who sets the standard image of a person. For example
, models like Kendall Jenner, who posted her doll-like appearance
in
social media platforms where most Change preposition
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of
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people
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This
action may lead to negative effects especially in teens and young adults because it could distort their minds and attitudes to themselves and to other people
. Those who are emotional
vulnerable could Replace the word
emotionally
also
experience mental health problems such
as depression and anorexia.
Additionally
, due to
the advancement of medical science, the price of plastic surgeries
is getting cheaper, where
even low to middle-class earners Correct word choice
and
able
to afford the operations. Add a missing verb
are able
For instance
, many facilities in South Korea are able to increase their revenues because of the low prices they offer on operations like a
double-eyelid surgery. Most Correct article usage
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Koreans are born with one eyelid only and in their country, having two Correct article usage
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eyelid
is considered beautiful which was influenced by the Change to a plural noun
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nations.
In conclusion, I think Correct your spelling
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this
should be seen as a negative development because individuals are not able to be contented with their looks due to
the appearance
they have seen from other people
and the rate of getting cosmetic surgeries
nowadays is cheaper.Submitted by angeline07 on
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