The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane.

 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
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The given chart illustrates how
sugar
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is made by
sugar
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cane
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.
Overall
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, it is apparent that there are seven stages in the production process, beginning with
sugar
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canes and ending with the drying and cooling of
sugar
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. First of all,
sugar
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cane
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has grown from 12 to 18 months which is collected by people
as well as
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using vehicles to be more productive. Having been harvested, the
cane
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is given to the device to crush it,
then
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it turns into
juice
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. Before pouring
cane
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juice
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into a cooking evaporator at a high temperature in order to convert it into syrup, the
cane
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juice
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must be filtered through the limestone and
juice
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is purified
further
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. At the following stage of the process, in terms of the centrifuge, the syrup is divided into
sugar
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crystals .
Subsequently
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,
sugar
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will be dried and cooled
at the end
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step and consumed later.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words sugar, cane, juice with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • manufacturing process
  • sugar cane
  • harvesting
  • transporting
  • factory
  • crushing
  • extracting
  • juice
  • filtering
  • impurities
  • heating
  • evaporating
  • syrup
  • boiling
  • crystallizing
  • sugar
  • separating
  • drying
  • packaging
  • distribution
  • stage
  • process
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