The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane.

 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
The given chart illustrates how
sugar
is made by
sugar
cane
.
Overall
, it is apparent that there are seven stages in the production process, beginning with
sugar
canes and ending with the drying and cooling of
sugar
. First of all,
sugar
cane
has grown from 12 to 18 months which is collected by people
as well as
using vehicles to be more productive. Having been harvested, the
cane
is given to the device to crush it,
then
it turns into
juice
. Before pouring
cane
juice
into a cooking evaporator at a high temperature in order to convert it into syrup, the
cane
juice
must be filtered through the limestone and
juice
is purified
further
. At the following stage of the process, in terms of the centrifuge, the syrup is divided into
sugar
crystals .
Subsequently
,
sugar
will be dried and cooled
at the end
step and consumed later.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words sugar, cane, juice with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • manufacturing process
  • sugar cane
  • harvesting
  • transporting
  • factory
  • crushing
  • extracting
  • juice
  • filtering
  • impurities
  • heating
  • evaporating
  • syrup
  • boiling
  • crystallizing
  • sugar
  • separating
  • drying
  • packaging
  • distribution
  • stage
  • process
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