The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The given chart illustrates how
sugar
is made by Use synonyms
sugar
Use synonyms
cane
. Use synonyms
Overall
, it is apparent that there are seven stages in the production process, beginning with Linking Words
sugar
canes and ending with the drying and cooling of Use synonyms
sugar
.
First of all, Use synonyms
sugar
Use synonyms
cane
has grown from 12 to 18 months which is collected by people Use synonyms
as well as
using vehicles to be more productive. Having been harvested, the Linking Words
cane
is given to the device to crush it, Use synonyms
then
it turns into Linking Words
juice
. Before pouring Use synonyms
cane
Use synonyms
juice
into a cooking evaporator at a high temperature in order to convert it into syrup, the Use synonyms
cane
Use synonyms
juice
must be filtered through the limestone and Use synonyms
juice
is purified Use synonyms
further
.
At the following stage of the process, in terms of the centrifuge, the syrup is divided into Linking Words
sugar
crystals . Use synonyms
Subsequently
, Linking Words
sugar
will be dried and cooled Use synonyms
at the end
step and consumed later.Linking Words
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words sugar, cane, juice with synonyms.
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