the bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014
The bar chart gives information about how much electricity has been used and produced among the top 10 countries in 2014.
Overall
, there is no doubt that China and the United States are leaders in these statistics.
At the top of the chart located China producing 5398 billion
, and using 5322 billion
of electricity. In second place is the United States which consumes 3866 billion
, but produces 4099 billion
. After these two ,countries the indications dropped dramatically. For instance
, the third is Russia with 1057 and 1038 billion
in production and consumption, respectively. Followed by Japan and India with quite similar numbers.
After 5 places there is Canada which produces 618.9,
and uses 499.9 Remove the comma
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billion
of electricity. Furthermore
, there are France and Brazil manufacture 561.2 and 530.7 billion
respectively. The consumption rates
of these countries are less than their production rates
. After that is
Germany, which is the only country where using rates
outraced the production rates
. The last
country is the Korean Republic which has the lowest rate among these nationsSubmitted by muharodnoy on
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