the bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014
The bar chart gives information about how much electricity has been used and produced among the top 10 countries in 2014.
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, there is no doubt that China and the United States are leaders in these statistics.
At the top of the chart located China producing 5398 Linking Words
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, the third is Russia with 1057 and 1038 Linking Words
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