You have recently bought a product after seeing a company’s advertisement. You then discovered that the purchased product did not match the description of the advertisement. Write a letter to the manager of that company. In your letter; • describe the product you bought • state the description the advertisement gave of the product • say what you want the company to do to make it up to you

#product #company’s #advertisement #description #manager #company

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

this

letter to complain about a product which I bought from your

company

two days ago. Please let me elaborate on my problem. I purchased a

laptop

from your North Avenue branch. The

laptop

's colour is white, and its model is SV8821. I used a credit card for payment and can provide you with the reference number. In your advertisement, the

company

asserted that the

laptop

's ram is 2 GB.

However

, when I opened the package and used the

laptop

, I understood that it has 1 GB ram. Because my intention to buy

this

laptop

was to use it for programming, I require a

laptop

with better ram.

As a result

this

model is not suitable for me.

Lastly

, since in your advertisement your

company

claimed that if customers do not be happy with the product, the

company

will refund your payment, I want to ask for full payment as soon as possible. Yours faithfully Amir Ghasemi

Submitted by amirghas92 on Fri Jun 02 2023

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8.50

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