You have recently bought a product after seeing a company’s advertisement. You then discovered that the purchased product did not match the description of the advertisement. Write a letter to the manager of that company. In your letter; • describe the product you bought • state the description the advertisement gave of the product • say what you want the company to do to make it up to you

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

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letter to complain about a product which I bought from your

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two days ago. Please let me elaborate on my problem. I purchased a

laptop

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from your North Avenue branch. The

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's colour is white, and its model is SV8821. I used a credit card for payment and can provide you with the reference number. In your advertisement, the

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asserted that the

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's ram is 2 GB.

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, when I opened the package and used the

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, I understood that it has 1 GB ram. Because my intention to buy

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laptop

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was to use it for programming, I require a

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with better ram.

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this

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model is not suitable for me.

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, since in your advertisement your

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claimed that if customers do not be happy with the product, the

company

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will refund your payment, I want to ask for full payment as soon as possible. Yours faithfully Amir Ghasemi

Submitted by amirghas92 on Fri Jun 02 2023

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

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7 paragraphs

164 words

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