The graph shows the amount of money spent on books in Germany, France, Italy and Austria between 1995 and 2005.

The graph shows the amount of money spent on books in Germany, France, Italy and Austria between 1995 and 2005.
The graph below
illustrate
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that four
countries
(
Germany
,France,Italy and
Austria
) spent money on books
with
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in
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US
dollars
from 1995 to 2005.İn the graph, each country is plotted with lines of a different
color
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(
Germany
light green,France blue,Italy Yellow and
Austria
dark green).
Overall
,in the graph obviously seems that
,
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Germany
spent more money
for
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on
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books than all 3
countries
between 1995 and 2005 and of course clearly it seems that all
countries
was
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were
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up and down in the year
of
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1995 and 2005. The spending money
for
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on
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books was observed
increasing
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to increase
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in three
countries
(
Germany
,Italy and
Austria
).
Germany
spent 80
million
dollars
in 1995 and growth was to 90
million
in 1999,
however
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expences
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expenses
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was
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dropped to 85
million
dollars
in 2003 and again raise to 95
million
dollars
in 2005.
Thus
Italy and
Austria
(Italy in 1995 was 50,55
million
was 1997,65
million
was 2005 and
Austria
in 1995 was 30,between 1999 and 2001 was constantly 40
million
and in 2005
dramaticly
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dramatically
lifted to 73
million
).
While
France
was slightly increase
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was slightly increased
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from 55 to 75
million
dollars
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • expenditure
  • fluctuate
  • trend
  • peak
  • trough
  • correlation
  • digital reading platforms
  • socio-economic factors
  • initiatives
  • cultural influence
  • statistical data
  • purchasing habits
  • book industry
  • consumer spending
  • educational resources
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