You recently went to a concert and thought one of the singers was very good. You want to tell him how you feel. Write a letter to the singer. in your letter •say how you feel about his performance •give details of your musical activities •explain how you would like him to help you with your musical activities.

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Dear Sir, I am writing with regard to the wonderful RGB band’s recent concert in the Milad Tower music hall. I am Mohammadreza, a pianist and one of the fans of your incredible voice. I would like to thank you for your band’s great performance particularly your extraordinary singing that night. It was one of the most amazing presentations in my entire artistic life,

in other words

, your exceptional performance made me feel flying over the clouds. In fact, I play the piano since I was 15 years old,

therefore

, I consider myself a semi-pro pianist, though, performing in a concert where you are the singer is a dream of mine for several years. I would like to send you some of my performances that I recently recorded in my private studio. It would be great if you listen to them and give me some feedback about them.

As a result

, your professional opinion would have a significant impact on improving my performance and would take it several steps

further

. Thank you in advance, I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Mohammadreza Ansari.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

186 words

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