You have just read an article in an international magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letter correct the information in the article explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information suggest what the magazine should do about this situation

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
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letter to let you know about the article, which was published
last
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Sunday regarding the
temple
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in Madurai. The data was mentioned about the Meenakshi Amman
temple
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and I found some of the details were inappropriate to my knowledge.
First,
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the
temple
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is located in the centre part of the city, that said is situated outside of the town.
Above all
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, it is mentioned as six monumental towers which was incorrect, actually, it has five towers, four towers facing in each direction
such
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as north, south, west, and east, and another one is at the centre of the
temple
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. Let me explain the reason to modify the released information because it is a historical monument
as well as
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this
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particular
temple
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plays a vital role in the city with Goddes's dress colour people will predict the future of the year,
this
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is the procedure people following it for centuries. I know well about the city of Madurai because I have born and raised in the same place;
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I know well about all these details. Would you kindly consider
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as my request and change the information correctly and publish it by the coming week;
besides
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, mention the corrected detail in the note.
This
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will really help me and
also
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the readers to know the true report. Thank you for your consideration. I believe the corrected message will be published as early as possible. Yours faithfully, Jen
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