You have just read an article in an international magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letter correct the information in the article explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information suggest what the magazine should do about this situation
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing
this
letter to let you know about the article, which was published last
Sunday regarding the temple
in Madurai.
The data was mentioned about the Meenakshi Amman temple
and I found some of the details were inappropriate to my knowledge. First,
the temple
is located in the centre part of the city, that said is situated outside of the town. Above all
, it is mentioned as six monumental towers which was incorrect, actually, it has five towers, four towers facing in each direction such
as north, south, west, and east, and another one is at the centre of the temple
.
Let me explain the reason to modify the released information because it is a historical monument as well as
this
particular temple
plays a vital role in the city with Goddes's dress colour people will predict the future of the year, this
is the procedure people following it for centuries. I know well about the city of Madurai because I have born and raised in the same place; therefore
I know well about all these details.
Would you kindly consider this
as my request and change the information correctly and publish it by the coming week; besides
, mention the corrected detail in the note. This
will really help me and also
the readers to know the true report.
Thank you for your consideration. I believe the corrected message will be published as early as possible.
Yours faithfully,
JenSubmitted by rajipeter3011 on
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