The table below shows the table made by a coffee shop in an office building on a typical weekday. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The table illustrates the
wich
made by a Correct your spelling
which
coffee
shop in an office building on weekends.
Look at from an
Correct article usage
apply
overall
, In office
building 4 types of Add an article
an office
the office
menu
of Add an article
the menu
a menu
meal
and drink served Add an article
the meal
a meal
in
weekdays, Change preposition
on
such
as Coffee
, Tea, patries
, and Correct your spelling
pastries
parties
sandwich
. The
Correct article usage
Coffee
coffee
is most purchase
Replace the word
purchased
the
menu Change preposition
on the
in
the rest days, Change preposition
on
while
tea is lowest
sold out.
Correct article usage
the lowest
According to
morning time
between 7:30 am to 10:30 am, coffee
and pastries has been sold out at peak state which is 265 and 275 respectively, whereas
sandwich
declined to purchase by peoples, which is only 50. After next 2 hours sandwich
steadily rise and reach at 200, while
in this
hours teas ratio dropped down and come to 50. In the afternoon time
, Coffee
and pastries hold by peoples again (140 and 150), while
sandwich
rapidly down (40). In the evening time
from 5:30 pm to 8:30 pm, coffee
and sandwich
amount
is grow, coffee
and pastries amount
fall, which is nearly 80.
In the morning time
great purchase the meal and drink, which is total 700, after 2 hours vends total 530, then
in the evening and last
afternoon, which is lowest bought by peoples, To sum up
top rank sold by individuals was coffee
drink has been highest amount
earn (795), and tea has been lowest amount
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, sandwich, time, amount with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 4 times.
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