The two maps below show road access to city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The picture illustrates

two

different ways how people can be going to the city hospital. The comparisons were shown in 2007 and 2010.

This

writing will be highlighted the big changes and mentioned what changes that have been made.

Overall

, there is no big differentiation in the road in the past three years compared to 2010. They just separated staff and public car parks.

In addition

, they were given access to the bus station. To summarise, in 2007 the parking for hospitals' employees and visitors was adjusted in one place only. Three years after, they have made

two

vehicle parks; the old one is now for employees only and visitors are moved to the north.

Next,

in 2010 they added the bus station between the hospital road. They

also

added

two

roundabouts on

this

road.

Last

, in 2007 there is only one door entered from the parking to the city hospital.

Moreover

, in 2010 they has

two

doors entered.

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