The two maps below show road access to city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The two maps below show road access to city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The picture illustrates

two

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different ways how people can be going to the city hospital. The comparisons were shown in 2007 and 2010.

This

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writing will be highlighted the big changes and mentioned what changes that have been made.

Overall

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, there is no big differentiation in the road in the past three years compared to 2010. They just separated staff and public car parks.

In addition

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, they were given access to the bus station. To summarise, in 2007 the parking for hospitals' employees and visitors was adjusted in one place only. Three years after, they have made

two

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vehicle parks; the old one is now for employees only and visitors are moved to the north.

Next,

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in 2010 they added the bus station between the hospital road. They

also

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added

two

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roundabouts on

this

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road.

Last

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, in 2007 there is only one door entered from the parking to the city hospital.

Moreover

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, in 2010 they has

two

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doors entered.

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Introduction: The introduction is missing.

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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.

Introduction: The chart intro is missing.

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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words two with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.

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7
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

159 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

traffic flow
road access
ring road
bus stops
bus station
congestion
parking facilities
pedestrian crossings
vehicular flow
organizational structure
accessibility
enhancements
configuration
dedicated
diverting traffic

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The two maps below show road access to city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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