Advertising is becoming more and more common in everyday life. Is it a positive or negative development?

In modern
society
, it is very easy for people to find
advertisement
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. Human beings live a daily life flooded with the promotions of
products
or services
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everywhere. It has several points of positive and negative developments.
Also
, I will illustrate what those are. Recently, it has been common that
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companies
create
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profit
promoting
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their
products
or services via TV
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programs
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, YouTube and other social network services.
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the perspective of the companies, they can show their new
products
to the public.
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, if they were
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image to people, it would be able to change the consciousness of people towards them positively.
Similarly
, many
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individuals are using
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not only to give
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information but
also
to promote themselves.
For example
, a lot of famous online teachers utilize online
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to show their lectures, which can be earnings for them.
Consequently
, by advertising something,
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society
can expect revitalization of the consumer market and
also
it can bring activation in
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market.
On the other hand
, advertisements often bring
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adverse impacts on
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society
. Reckless promotion can make
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image to the public. It can contribute to
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the consumers and it leads to
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companies' trust.
Moreover
, it can cause
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the price of the
products
and the marketers can be eliminated in the end. In the worst case, the
society
can be formed with unproven data. In conclusion,
advertisement
has positive and negative impacts too.
Therefore
, excessive promotion should be regulated to maximise the effect of the
advertisement
.
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  • promote
  • economic growth
  • provide information
  • awareness
  • job opportunities
  • manipulative
  • misleading
  • consumerism
  • materialism
  • invade
  • personal space
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