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many parts of the world are losing important natural resources such as forests, animals and clean water. choose one resource that is disappearing and explain why it need to be saved. use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion

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we know: the world is developing more and more. And it make many part of the world are losing important natural resources
such
 as forests, animals and clean
water
. the clean
water
 is the top concern for everyone. and now, we will study about
this
 issue. the
first,
we need to know clean
water
 is very important. Clean
water
 is an indispensable resource in human daily
life
such
 as cook, take a shower, wash clothes and productive
life
such
 as generate electricity. And especially,
water
 help people maintain
life
.
However
, in recent decades,
water
 sources anre increasingly seriously polluted. The main cause is
due to
: industrial waste, domestic waste, plastic waste, oil spill into the sea and ocean use chemical fertilizers so we need to take solutions to limit
water
 pollution: treat wastewater
according to
 standards, save
water
, use
water
 purification equipment, sort garbage property As can be seen, clean
water
 is an extremely important resources, thanks to it, people can maintain
life
. we need to know how to rationally use
as well as
 save
water
, prevent adverse effects affecting them
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