Today, more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic. What are the benefits and disadvantages four tourists who visit such places?

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
It
is often assume
Change the verb form
is often assumed
show examples
that some people would like to try new things ,
visit
Correct word choice
and visit
show examples
a
Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
show examples
new
places
Use synonyms
even if
Linking Words
this
Correct pronoun usage
these
show examples
places
Use synonyms
a
Add a missing verb
are a
show examples
little bit hard or dangerous.
Nawadys
Correct your spelling
Nowadays
many tourists are
become
Wrong verb form
becoming
show examples
more
intersting
Correct your spelling
interesting
in these
places
Use synonyms
such
Linking Words
as
Sahara
Correct article usage
the Sahara
show examples
desert or the Antarctic . In
this
Linking Words
essay
Add a comma
,essay
show examples
I will tell you
in my opinion
Add the comma(s)
, in my opinion,
show examples
what are the advantages and disadvantages of being in
such
Linking Words
a locations
Correct the article-noun agreement
locations
a location
show examples
like Sahara .
Firstly
Linking Words
one of the benefits of visiting these
places
Use synonyms
is having a new and unique experience , an experience that probably you never had .
Moreover
Linking Words
,going to these spots will definitely provide you
the
Add the preposition
with the
show examples
oppertinuty
Correct your spelling
opportunity
to discover the culture of the country and
also
Linking Words
a chance to meet the people of
this
Linking Words
country not only
this
Linking Words
but
also
Linking Words
being in
such
Linking Words
a
Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
show examples
difficult conditions will give you
a
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
differnt
Correct your spelling
different
lessons . In another hand of course there are some
disadvanteges
Correct your spelling
disadvantages
of visiting these
places
Use synonyms
, many of these locations are
dengerous
Correct your spelling
dangerous
it could cause
a
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
serious injury
Add the comma(s)
, for example,
show examples
for example
Linking Words
many tourists have
die
Wrong verb form
died
show examples
when
thay
Correct your spelling
they
try to live in
Saudi
Correct article usage
the Saudi
show examples
desert for a couple of days .In
conclusion
Add a comma
,conclusion
show examples
visitng
Correct your spelling
visiting
these
places
Use synonyms
are really
intersting
Correct your spelling
interesting
idea
however
Linking Words
anyone who
want
Change the verb form
wants
show examples
to try should be careful and aware of everything.
Submitted by rayan.alzahrani.88 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs

The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.

A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).

Stick to this essay structure:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: