The table provides information the reasons of people using the car in city, and the pie chart shows the percentage of transport namely car, LRT(Light Rail Transit), bus and taxi.
The table provides information
the
reasons Change preposition
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of
people Change preposition
apply
using
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use
the
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apply
car
in city
, and the pie chart shows the percentage of transport namely Add an article
the city
car
, LRT(Light Rail Transit), Fix the agreement mistake
cars
bus
and Fix the agreement mistake
buses
taxi
.
As is shown by the table Fix the agreement mistake
taxis
that
travel to work Correct pronoun usage
apply
illustrate
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illustrates
the
higher value in comparison with shopping and leisure activities. Correct article usage
a
In addition
, talking children to school and business demonstrate approximately same
levels. It is seen from the pie chart that the rate of Correct article usage
the same
car
is much more compared with the bus and the taxi.
As regards the travel to work, which represented just over one half per cent. Add an article
the car
By contrast
, using the car
for shopping and leisure activities stood at the same percentage( 15%). Furthermore
, the figures for business and taking children to school were 45% and 40% respectively.
While
the using of car
accounted for close to Fix the agreement mistake
cars
one half
, the proportion was slightly lower, at just over Add a hyphen
one-half
one third
. Add a hyphen
one-third
Moreover
, the bus and taxi presented the same levels. (10 per cent)Submitted by dnm.best on
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