Some people believe that individuals should be allowed to own a gun as a means to protect themselves and their families. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
There is a conflicting view on whether a
person
should own a gun
or not to defend themselves and their families
. I completely disagree that an individual should own a weapon because owners could unexpectedly use
it for other purposes and children might curiously trigger the weapon.
Moreover
, ownership of guns can pose a threat to families
because there is a possibility that it can be used accidentally. Other members of the family might use
weapons for agenda such
as revenge on someone they hate. Children might find the gun
and accidentally use
it. For instance
, there were reported cases where the guns were left attended by parents and the child was able to unlock the safety lock of the gun
and pulled the trigger. I believe that situations like these could be prevented if the family do not possess guns and the government must ensure the community that they are safe.
Furthermore
, an individual that owned a gun
may use
it for other purposes. Especially if this
person
has mental health issues such
as schizophrenia, which may act dangerously to other people. For example
in the USA, there were cases that a person
murdered all the students and teachers inside the classroom without a reason. These unfortunate scenarios could lead to trauma for the survivors and the families
they have left. I do think that these consequences could be avoided and must be not allowed to happen.
In conclusion, I completely disagree that an individual should not have a gun
in order to protect their families
because this
could end a tragedy in the family and the different attitudes of a person
owning a weapon is unpredictable.Submitted by angeline07 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite