A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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There’s no doubt that our
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as a
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have shifted massively from the
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of our forefathers, especially in the
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50 years. The extent can be argued, but I believe that most
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will agree that there has definitely been a
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is especially true if one takes a closer look at how current
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estimates personal success and attributes
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to individuals. I personally believe that, as a
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, we have traded virtuous living for flashy living. In
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beliefs. I strongly believe the main reason why
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as honour, kindness, and trust no longer seem important is
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of a
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away from
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in today's
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, or, to put it another way, a
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towards secularism. A lot of the so-called "old-fashioned
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" are core
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of the main religions around the world, from Christianity to Islam to Buddhism, and even in Sikhism, honour, kindness, and trust are required from their followers. Since
people
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naturally pattern their lives to the
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they believe in, it makes sense that they would exhibit, or at the very least try to exhibit, some of the core
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of the
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. Following the same logic, it
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makes sense that the
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people
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believe in
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religions, the fewer of their core attributes they will exhibit. What most
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who
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away from religious beliefs do not realise is that secularism in itself is a
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and, as
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, has its own
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. Some of the
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of secularism include the pursuit of pleasure and material things, the pursuit of fame, and the pursuit of so-called "happiness" as the sole purpose of life.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Social status
  • Material possessions
  • Old-fashioned values
  • Honour
  • Kindness
  • Trust
  • Judged
  • Importance
  • Traditional
  • Reflection
  • Achievements
  • Hard work
  • Disregarded
  • Well-balanced
  • Meaningful
  • Cultural norms
  • Societal norms
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