A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

There’s no doubt that our
values
as a
society
have shifted massively from the
values
of our forefathers, especially in the
last
50 years. The extent can be argued, but I believe that most
people
will agree that there has definitely been a
shift
.
This
is especially true if one takes a closer look at how current
society
estimates personal success and attributes
values
to individuals. I personally believe that, as a
society
, we have traded virtuous living for flashy living. In
this
essay, I will briefly present my reasons for holding
such
beliefs. I strongly believe the main reason why
values
such
as honour, kindness, and trust no longer seem important is
as a result
of a
shift
away from
religion
in today's
society
, or, to put it another way, a
shift
towards secularism. A lot of the so-called "old-fashioned
values
" are core
values
of the main religions around the world, from Christianity to Islam to Buddhism, and even in Sikhism, honour, kindness, and trust are required from their followers. Since
people
naturally pattern their lives to the
religion
they believe in, it makes sense that they would exhibit, or at the very least try to exhibit, some of the core
values
of the
religion
. Following the same logic, it
also
makes sense that the
less
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people
believe in
such
religions, the fewer of their core attributes they will exhibit. What most
people
who
shift
away from religious beliefs do not realise is that secularism in itself is a
religion
and, as
such
, has its own
values
. Some of the
values
of secularism include the pursuit of pleasure and material things, the pursuit of fame, and the pursuit of so-called "happiness" as the sole purpose of life.
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  • Social status
  • Material possessions
  • Old-fashioned values
  • Honour
  • Kindness
  • Trust
  • Judged
  • Importance
  • Traditional
  • Reflection
  • Achievements
  • Hard work
  • Disregarded
  • Well-balanced
  • Meaningful
  • Cultural norms
  • Societal norms
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