Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
It is true that some
people
believe the essential subject in school is History
, meanwhile, other people
say the crucial subjects
are technology
and science
. This
essay will examine both views.
To begin
with, every country
in this
world has its own history
, and from it, we learn many things, such
as wars, kingdoms, trades, slavery, and many more. In Indonesia, we had a long story to get our freedom
. Furthermore
, the Indonesian government made a curriculum with some core subjects
, and one
of the important subjects
is history
. The aim was to tell people
, especially students, how Indonesia gets freedom
and to grow nationalism in pupils' souls. For example
, in history
books, they tell the founders, the heroes, places, dates, and how the story was. One
person did not reach freedom
, but every people
in this
country
contributed to getting it. As a result
, history
is important and Indonesian citizens knew how the country
got freedom
and grew nationalism.
However
, in the globalization era, technology
and science
are developing. Public ease to access any information around the world. Netizens can get up-to-date news from their phones everywhere and anywhere. Technology
helps people
to work, ago 5 people
handled one
job, but now one
job is handled by one
person. This
encourages a country
to put it into the curriculum since these subjects
are crucial for humanity's future. These subjects
aim to lead the students to become part of society and let them make human life improve. For instance
, medicine is improving. Before many people
died because of influenza but over time, scientists found a vaccine, and nowadays, the flu is becoming a common illness. Moreover
, a country
has some wishes that the young generation will make some invented and bring a solution to the country
's problem, history
is not important because it was the past and now we are in the present and need to be ready for the future. Finally
, many benefits from technology
and science
will help people
to live better.
To conclude
, history
is an important subject because, from it, we know where we came from and what happened in the past, so we know the story, we can learn from our mistakes, and we are able to give respect to our heroes. Science
and technology
are also
essential; from these subjects
, our knowledge is broadened, and we will get answers to many problems we face.Submitted by ieltscuns2022 on
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