The chart below shows the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.
The given pie chart illustrates the
water
consumption
ratio on three aims of six different regions in the world. Overall
, the region of Central Asia is the most dominant agricultural water
consumer, however
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,however
Europe
is the leader of
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in
the
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apply
water
consumption
for Industrial purposes.
Many areas use
water
mostly for cultivative
activities Correct your spelling
cultivation
cultivating
such
as Central Asia, Africa, Sout East Asia and South America
, with 88%, 84%, 81% and 71%, respectively. However
, whilst its all counterparts use
only less than %10 water
for domestic issues, South America
has the biggest ratio of domestic water
consumption
with 19%.
The remaining two territory
, North Change to a plural noun
territories
America
and Europe
use
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apply
water
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for
While
Europe
's industrial use
is 53%, North America
's industrial consume
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5
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than 5
Europe
. These companies placed second (Europe
) and third places (North America
) for domestic usage after South America
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