The graph shows average annual expenditures on cell phone and residential phone services between 2001 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the amount of money
spend
by consumers on cell Change the form of the verb
spent
phone
and residential Fix the agreement mistake
phones
services
over 10 year
period. The data has been provided by United
States Bureau of Labor Statistics and units are given in dollars.
Correct article usage
the United
Overall
, cell phone services
have become the most popular by 2010 with the money spent each year
while
the
residential phone Correct article usage
apply
services
have shown decreasing trend though they were preferred by Americans in the year
2001.
With regard to the services
provided in the residential area, it is visible that they have gained popularity over the years. The average expenditure on this
service started from $ 200 with a slight increase to $300 and almost doubled in the year
2007. Then
, it continued to rise reaching the highest spend
of above $ 700 Replace the word
spending
at the end
of the period.
On the contrary
, the services
provided in the residential area were the most popular initially
but declined dramatically until 2010. The customer used to spend almost $ 700 on average in 2001 with continuous
drop under $600 in five Add an article
a continuous
year
period and falling further
by arriving at the lowest amount of $400 in 2010.Submitted by kritishahi66 on
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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