The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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line graph illustrates the
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dioxide
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emissions
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made by people living in different countries (United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal) over forty year period. Units are given as
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dioxide
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emissions
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in metric
tonnes
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.
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it is evident that
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the
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carbon
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dioxide
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emissions
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have decreased significantly in
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Kingdom and Portugal
whereas
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these
emissions
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show an upward trend in Italy and Portugal till 2007.
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, it can be inferred that the British people released the highest level of
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into the atmosphere at the beginning but reduced considerably
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9 metric
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until 2007. People living in Sweden emitted approximately 9 metric
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of
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dioxide
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with
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increase in 10
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reaching above 10 metric
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and
then
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dramatically decreasing below 6 metric
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at the end
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of
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.
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the release of pollutants into
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were
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quite low by Italian and Portuguese
initially
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but
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it has increased steadily over the
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. The
carbon
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dioxide
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levels in Sweden started
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4 million
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and rose above 7 million
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in 30
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, it remained unchanged for
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10
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, the
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in Portugal were the least (less than 2 metric
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) as compared to all the countries mentioned but rose rapidly to 5 metric
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in 1997. In subsequent
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, the emission levelled off in
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country.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words carbon, dioxide, emissions, tonnes, years with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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