The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production in a country in two years

The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production in a country in two years
The given pie graphs illustrate the proportion of
energy
production
from five different
sources
in a country between 1995 and 2005.
Overall
, gas, petrol and coal were the most significant
energy
sources
during the period of 10 years,
although
petrol lost some of its
production
amounth
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amount
amounts
over time. Coal was
also
the leading
energy
source by far both 1995 and 2005. The three biggest
energy
suppliers were coal, petrol and gas in 1995, with 29.80%, 29.27%, and 29.63%, respectively. Both charcoal and gasoline continued their dominance with an increase of around 1% to approximately 30-31% a year in 2005,
however
, the percentage of
energy
production
from
petro
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Petro
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reduced by roughly 10 per cent to 19.55% per year.
Nevertheless
, it preserved its rank as the
third biggest
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energy
provider in the country in 2005. The remaining 10% share was
hold
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held
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by nuclear power(6.40%) and other
sources
(4.90%) in 1995. Both of the groups, which were Nuclear power and other
sources
, nearly doubled their size from 1995 to 2005,
therefore
, their
energy
production
rates increased
9
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-10% per year in 2005.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, production, sources with synonyms.
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