The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production in a country in two years
The given pie graphs illustrate the proportion of
energy
production
from five different sources
in a country between 1995 and 2005. Overall
, gas, petrol and coal were the most significant energy
sources
during the period of 10 years, although
petrol lost some of its production
amounth
over time. Coal was Correct your spelling
amount
amounts
also
the leading energy
source by far both 1995 and 2005.
The three biggest energy
suppliers were coal, petrol and gas in 1995, with 29.80%, 29.27%, and 29.63%, respectively. Both charcoal and gasoline continued their dominance with an increase of around 1% to approximately 30-31% a year in 2005, however
, the percentage of energy
production
from petro
reduced by roughly 10 per cent to 19.55% per year. Change the capitalization
Petro
Nevertheless
, it preserved its rank as the third biggest
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third-biggest
energy
provider in the country in 2005.
The remaining 10% share was hold
by nuclear power(6.40%) and other Wrong verb form
held
sources
(4.90%) in 1995. Both of the groups, which were Nuclear power and other sources
, nearly doubled their size from 1995 to 2005, therefore
, their energy
production
rates increased 9
-10% per year in 2005.Change preposition
by 9
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