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The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the mian features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the mian features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The
plan
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illustrate
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 some proposed changes
on
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industrial
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the industrial
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 area in the town of Norbiton in the following future
plan
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. The significant changes to the town will be housing
instead
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 of factory. Other developments like a playground, shops, medical centre and school will be added south side of
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river
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 around the housing. Looking at the current
plan
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 of an industrial site, we can see eight parts of factories
are
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around the road under the
river
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. The second
plan
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 shows that there will be expansion with additional rad with
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a bridge
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 to cross
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river
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 and one part of housing will be located north of
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river
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, and Farmland will move to
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the east
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 of
uppon
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upper
river
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. Currently, there are no facilities to enjoy life around the factories, but the new shops and medical centre will be available
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left
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the left
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 and right
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the new
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 round road in the future. Looking at the east road area, the playground and the school will be built
surround
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of
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 housings.

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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words plan, river with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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