The pie charts below show the percentage of five kinds of books sold by a booksellere between 1972 and 2012

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The three pie charts illustrate how different genres of books contributed to the sale of a bookseller

percentagewise

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percentage-wise

from 1972 to 2012.

Overall

, adult fiction and children’s fiction became the two most dominant genres in the sale,

whereas

the other three genres declined in popularity

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the end of the period. In 1972, Adult friction

as well as

Biography and Children’s fiction, had the same proportion of sales, which accounts for 20% of the total.

However

, Adult friction experienced a dramatic increase to become almost half of the book sales in 2012. The selling of Children friction had a slight rise of 5% throughout the year.

In contrast

, biography had a sharp decrease to 8%. Other types of books drop considerably from 25% to 12% in 4 decades.

Although

the genre of travel had increased by 3 % in 1992, it experienced a substantial drop to 10% in the end.

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The pie charts below show the percentage of five kinds of books sold by a booksellere between 1972 and 2012

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

Many of the products we buy nowadays break or wear out very quickly. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this for manufacturers and the public?

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