The chart below shows the percentage of male and female teachers in six different types of educational setting in the UK in 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
both
This
bar chart illustrates the proportion of teachers of both genders broken down into Six domain
Fix the agreement mistake
domains
regard to
educational purposes in the UK before 13 years. Replace the word
regarding
Overall
, what stands out from The graph is that the number of women shows an opposite pattern of the man
sector. Correct your spelling
male
According to
the graph, the highest percentage of female
observed in a nursery school with almost 90%, followed by a slight decrease in primary schools. Fix the agreement mistake
females
while
the the
fewest proportion was males with only 5% . Remove the redundancy
apply
Moreover
, in primary school , the number grew by merely 5% .Female ,which is 55% in secondary school was considerably more than men which makes up 45% . Secondly
, in collegeAdd a comma
,
gender
were identical at half.Fix the agreement mistake
genders
Furthermore
,unexpected figures seen in private training institutions the
Correct your spelling
that
male
exceeded Fix the agreement mistake
males
the
Correct article usage
apply
female
by almost 10% . Fix the agreement mistake
females
Finally
, at the university
the number of men teachers increased gradually to 70%, Add a comma
university,
whereas
the women faculty experienced a plunge to 30%.Submitted by demo_sq on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
▼
Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
▼
Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
▼
Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
▼
Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+
Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!