Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and techology. Discuss both these views and give your own opinions

University gives a lot of classes option for the students,
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some people prefer to taking science and technology-related study and some of them prefer to enrolling the class as they want.
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writing will be given both views and authors' opinions about how education can lead
someone
to their future life. On the one hand, it is true that science and IT are very important in our life because these studies are following the present time and always developed by
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time.
Thus
, many parents have been considering their children to
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subjects. In my view, it is good to consider our career path since we are youth, but it depends on
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capability.
For example
, some students are taking biology
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but they are not enjoying
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it is not their passion. Despite learning something that we do not like and leading us to bad grades, we can consider some courses that really match
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our desire and ability.
On the other hand
, it is not a bad idea for
someone
to take a class that they really want.
Moreover
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age of university students
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between 17 to 20 which golden age
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learning and experiencing something new.
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good
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and enjoy every process of learning.
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there are a lot of people who would like to switch their
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. On the other meaning, their job and educational
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are not linear.
For instance
,
someone
who studied history in the university, but in the
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he or she can be
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analyst. In conclusion, either student will take
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major or not,
that is
not a problem. Nowadays, many organisations and platforms provide a service
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developing and gaining new skills. Fresh
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graduates
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can take that extra courses if they want to switch
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. But, if they want to be an expert or a researcher in the future, science and IT are the best answer.
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