Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and techology. Discuss both these views and give your own opinions
University gives a lot of classes option for the students,
,
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however
some people prefer to taking science and technology-related study and some of them prefer to enrolling the class as they want. Add a comma
,however
This
writing will be given both views and authors' opinions about how education can lead someone
to their future life.
On the one hand, it is true that science and IT are very important in our life because these studies are following the present time and always developed by the
time. Correct article usage
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Thus
, many parents have been considering their children to enroll
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enrol
these
subjects. In my view, it is good to consider our career path since we are youth, but it depends on Change preposition
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someone
capability. Change noun form
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For example
, some students are taking biology class
but they are not enjoying Fix the agreement mistake
classes
because
it is not their passion. Despite learning something that we do not like and leading us to bad grades, we can consider some courses that really match Correct pronoun usage
it because
with
our desire and ability.
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On the other hand
, it is not a bad idea for someone
to take a class that they really want. Moreover
, average
age of university students Correct article usage
the average
are
between 17 to 20 which golden age Correct subject-verb agreement
is
to
learning and experiencing something new. Change preposition
for
Furthermore
, they will have a
good Correct article usage
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grade
and enjoy every process of learning. Fix the agreement mistake
grades
However
, in the past
there are a lot of people who would like to switch their Add a comma
,past
career
. On the other meaning, their job and educational Fix the agreement mistake
careers
background
are not linear. Fix the agreement mistake
backgrounds
For instance
, someone
who studied history in the university, but in the furure
he or she can be Correct your spelling
future
data
analyst.
In conclusion, either student will take Add an article
a data
technology-related
major or not, Add an article
a technology-related
that is
not a problem. Nowadays, many organisations and platforms provide a service to
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graduate
can take that extra courses if they want to switch Fix the agreement mistake
graduates
career
. But, if they want to be an expert or a researcher in the future, science and IT are the best answer.Fix the agreement mistake
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