The diagram details the process of making wool. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
This
figure depicts wool
making and use. it is clear from the diagram that we have four steps to make raw yarn.
According to
what is shown the farmers and the factories started with sharing to be easy for cleaning and separate the gust stuck on. After cleaning they dry them in the natural air ,not a machine and roll them in the spinning roller to create wool
balls.
Moreover
, the wool
is used to make tufts of wool
and separate them into small sizes to put them in the storage area and seal them with a ball shape to use in knitting or making clothes and carpets in the factories.
To sum up
, we could say that making wool
has many steps that lead to a lot of functionality,
and do not forget the spinning used for recycling the spring and Remove the comma
apply
that
is helpful for the environment.Correct pronoun usage
which
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