Providing children with pocket money on a weekly basis can benefit them in the future. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.
Families have struggled with so many upbringing problems, and the foundation of a society is based on members' attitudes. So, pocket money is one of the most issues that have to be considered by parents.
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children have so many expenses, I strongly believe that their own budget which is allocated by their parents has to be divided on a regular basis(especially a weekly ).Submitted by amirmasoumi93 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite