The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart and table represent the annual budget and ways of expenditure in one area of Britain in two successive years 2018 and 2019.Over the years, the
overall
income has increased by 15 Linking Words
million
and the trend of spending most of it on the salaries remained same.
The national government contributed nearly half of the total amount of 175.5 and 177.8 Use synonyms
million
dollars in 2018 and 2019 respectively. Use synonyms
While
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,
the amount collected from local taxes has a slight increase over the years from 91.2 to 102.3 Remove the comma
apply
million
dollars.Use synonyms
Furthermore
, one-quarter of the budget is from other sources like grants which account for 38 Linking Words
million
on average.
The salaries for the police and staff are the major part of the expenditure .In 2018,there is a drastic fall from 75 to 69 per cent Use synonyms
due to
de-employment.Linking Words
On the contrary
, technology has a sudden rise in share by 6. Linking Words
whereas
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whereas
there has been no fluctuation in the amount spent on buildings and transport .Linking Words
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